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Haunted Library proof of concept

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so I'm going to try my had at :iconthehauntedlibraryoct: which is being run by :icongooseworx: or as I knew him back in the day Cooper. anyway way back then I had a mary sue of a character named Drode who was a robot, I decided it be funny slash fun to run a robot in his OCT. S.M. Shipwright is based off a D&D character I played in a steampunk setting (rouge/monk if any one cares) I'm posting this proof of concept not as a app but as spring board for people to tell me what they think and what I should change.

Name:
S.M. Shipwright
Species: Automation (android)
Gender: gender-less references self as male
home: the realm of Urdray (steampunky setting still working on it)
backstory:

S.M. Shipwright is a Automation a built sentient race that and sold as purchasable employees, you do not own them and you have to pay them a salary, but they are built for the task. he was built as a mechanic for air ships, he is currently a out dated model but that does not stop people from hiring him, he has been on 3 air ships so far his current is a smuggling ship call "The  Invisible Hand" a ship run by a crew of misfits.

powers:
robotic strength
piston based punches
palm tasers 
night vision
magnetic feet
 

this is just a base line idea every thing
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ZeeDiKay's avatar
This is a pretty good start! I do like the color scheme so far, and there's a good use of repeating motifs with the almost can-like cylinders. The only things I'd suggest so far is to maybe make the shirt a bit lighter, so it doesn't blend too much with the silver, and maybe show the extent of his powers. He's a service android, so I don't think he'd go past the realm as the typical strong human. Also, what does he normally do on the job? Since he is built for work, that could also inform how his personality is presented.
Anyways, I'd love to see the final draft of Shipwright's reference sheet! Good luck!